Tuesday- Tyler shouted across the field.

Tyler shouted across the corn field to get Zac’s attention- Taylor.

Tyler hollered across the football field to Jaden.- Jasmine B

Furious Tyler, yelled across the battle field just as the bullet shot him.-James

Wednesday- The room looked strange.

The room belonging to Sam Swiss seemed bizarre due to the unfamiliar curtains. -Ryker

The strange looking room seemed haunted because it had toilet paper hanging from the ceiling.- Hayley

The glowing light coming from the cupboard, made the large dusty room appear strange at night.- Chloe

Thursday- He peered into the building.

He anxiously poked his twinkling, moonlight black pupil through the wooden shutters to spy on the girl of his dreams. -Annalyse

Tyler peered into the humungous billion dollar casino because the bright lights attracted his attention. -Zak

He peered into the the humungous building and saw a desk full of paper work.- Anton

Jordyn peered into the large building so he could see if anyone in there needed help to fix all the computers. -Alexis

Friday-His feet ached.

His swollen red feet badly ached, as hehadwalked30kmt raise money for charity.- Ivy

His big fat smelly feet ached in pain as he walked to the shower to wash them. -Jo

Jim suddenly landed on his left heel after falling down the wooden stairs, and to his surprise, his foot ached for days. – Krystal